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June 20, 2012
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For my Epic Draw-Off against :icondori-to:
His comic: [link]
I like his comic. You should vote for it.
* The Great and Powerful Trixie presents... *
THE EPIC DRAW-OFF OFFICIAL RULES:
1. You can vote for whichever comic you like more by leaving a comment containing the word "tacohat" somewhere in it.
For example: "Fluttershy is best tacohat!" or "I want to have your babies! Tacohat."
2. You can only vote once, so choose wisely.
3. Votes on both comics from the same person will be void.
4. The Great and Powerful Trixie demands you to be awesome!
Voting ends at 16:00 GMT on June 27th.
Edit: Voting has ended!
The loser has to draw a random/embarrassing request.
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"We never had a single fight..." IMPOSSIBRU! All siblings inevitably have conflicts. No fighting would be unnatural.

This comic was not as artistically amazing as I originally intended. I sacrificed quality and simplified the style because I'm a lazy bastard for the sake of time. I tried to keep the perspective and backgrounds dynamic. This is something I want to challenge artists to do more often. This is what you get when you mix over ambition with laziness: a comic epic in length but not in content.
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Critique by ~IzayaGraeme Jun 23, 2012, 2:36:03 PM
I think this was very good but had too much narration. A lot it could be seen from the art itself and the superfluous words took away from the impact. I think a good flashback would've told the story from the pictures and dialogue alone; it seems more natural that way. I don't know if you can just go in and take out the words but if you did that where your artwork clearly narrated itself then I think the comic would be much better for it. Lol I should have just made this into a critique... and so I just did.

Vision - You clearly knew the story you were trying to portray and did so wel. 5 stahs!

Originality - I never really see Twily and Shining have a fight so that was a nice idea. Of course you always see him being protective. 4.5 stahs!

Technique - Your art was great, no qualms here. 5 stahs!

Impact - Narration (Twily's thoughts) felt forced and took away from the feel that the artwork instilled. Y U NO MAKE ME FEELZ D: 3.5 stahs!
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Critique by ~nintendofreak768 Jun 21, 2012, 11:22:37 AM
This could have been better as parts. The first part could have been a normal day with them doing everything as normal. The second could have been the first part of this comic. Part 3 could have been her lost again and remembering everything that had happened in the past, and the last part could have been them doing something new, but still safe for twilight. I wanted to feel something when reading this, but it just felt that the point that you were trying to get across, was rushed. The artwork is great so I have nothing to say about it.
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~Alfamaxis May 8, 2013
I hav tacohat wiz meh :iconderpplz:
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~BlacklistBrony Apr 4, 2013  New member
touching...
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=AnnaLena250199 Mar 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Wow, a cute story^^
And you are really good at drawing ponies o.o
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~MyMiniatureEquine Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Thank you! I don't usually like how my older work look, but I'm still glad you like it.
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=AnnaLena250199 Mar 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
^^
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~koolkait Feb 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
shiny: *looks right then left* *mutters* that spoiled fill-EEEE I LUV U SOOO MUCH!
ma and pa: awww our kids are so nice :')
twily: D:
shiny: I-)


no just kiddin'
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~happipet Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I thought they never got into any fights...?
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~MyMiniatureEquine Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
According to the song, they never did,

but such a thing is virtually impossible for siblings.
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~PonymanXX7 Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww cute adorable and sad at the same time X*< FAV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Mood: Love ~FlameRays Nov 29, 2012
Wow! Its like its own episode! Nice work, mate!
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